I love you like death, my love
You are like me, your existence is full of lack!
Release me from this meaningless life
Release me from this innumerable me, which is little
Like death, tear me to pieces, awake
Get out of my body, break the sleep of my bones
Pour out again from the jugular vein in my poem
Seal my mouth with your name
Like death, take me and crush me later
Bury me among your memories at night
In the middle of the circle of hair, the blackness of your eyes
Bury me like a markless corpse
Let me think again
You, pour the description of the parting in my poem
that from scream.. the sound… my silent screams
May a thousand things happen to you in my poem
May a thousand things happen to you
Who is twisted between vomiting
Be a guest among everyone at night
To bitter tea and a glass of vomit
I loves you like death
I love you like death
but excuse me! Darkness has confused me
Forgive my poetry, I love you but..
#Tamana_Mehrzad
I love you like death
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